Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Copy Edit the World #2 (10 pts total)

1. "2103" should be 2013, typo. (Assignment sheet via website 4pts.)

 2. "All Kind of Heal Equipments" is a fragment, should read "We have all types of equipment". (Advertisement error 4pts.)

3. "attorney" should be capitalized because it comes before the persons name. (2 pts)

1 comment:

  1. 4+2+2=8 points
    BTW, it should be "the person's name"

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