Copy Edit the World (10pts total)

I. Corrections (4pts)

1. The "_" after Okla should be a "-".

2. Okla should have a "." after it.

II. Corrections (2pts)

1. Eighteen should be "18".

III. Corrections (4pts)
1. In the paragraph starting with "Part of the reason...," the words "that the" should be deleted-grammatical error.

2. The "58%" should be spelled out to 58 percent.